Go Your Own Way
Draft 1
25.01.14
By
Francesco Maria Carreri
Adapted from
’A Cupboard Full of Coats’
by Yvvette Edwards
f.carreri1@arts.ac.uk
07845794359
INT.LIVING ROOM.NIGHT
Lemon, a heavy caribbean man well into the second half of
his life, is sitting on the couch. He has the confidence and
calm of a man who’s seen alot in his life, but always looks
on the bright side. Jinx, a slight woman in her early 30s,
is cleaning the room, furtive and apparently anxious about
something. It already looks clean but she’s taking care of
every single detail.
LEMON
it looks fine to me
JINX
I like it when it’s clean
LEMON
so you do like it
Jinx looks at Lemon with a sort of annoyed face, then looks
around and nods
JINX
I’m sure it’s going to make a good
Impression
LEMON
of course it is, this place is the
best
Jinx seems to have noticed something and goes on to clean a
Bookshelf
JINX
there’s always a lot of dust
here, it would be so much easier
if there wasn’t so much stuff
around
Lemon looks at Jinx raising his eyebrows
JINX
30 years of useless stuff. Why this
huge bookshelf in the living room
when she barely ever read?
LEMON
She liked detective novels
JINX
They don’t count as reading
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 2.
LEMON
You know the story of that
bookshelf, right?
Jinx doesn’t answer
LEMON
Well, your Mum went to buy it at-
JINX
Fuck
LEMON
what?
JINX
I can’t remember when he’s coming.
He told me on the phone but I can’t
remember.
Lemon looks at her again and then away. As Lemon keeps on
cleaning the two get lost in their own thoughts for a
moment. Suddenly Lemon starts chuckling to himself. Jinx
spins round.
JINX
What?
LEMON
I just got to thinking about that
party, you know the one after
Brandon’s wedding?
JINX
Who’s Brandon again?
LEMON
You remember, when.. what was his
name.. oh God (laughs) he was near
passed out with boozin’, all on the
floor singin his big lungs out
Lemon laughs heartily to himself, then frowns
LEMON
(to himself)
Just what was the old fella’s name?
You were there, you must remember
the guy’s name.
JINX
I don’t even remember that
happening.
3.
Lemon looks at Jinx and shakes his head
INT. LIVING ROOM. DAY
Jinx and Lemon are in the room, with them Gareth, the estate
Agent
JINX
So, what do you think?
GARETH
it’s perfect
Jinx smiles
GARETH
Were you thinking of leaving the
furniture or not?
JINX
Yes, I’m leaving everything here,
definitely.
GARETH
Oh that’s great, I love the feeling
of the place, really old style.
JINX
Yeah, too old for me.
Jinx does a kind of fake nervous laugh
LEMON
It’s all from the 70s, my friend
Hank made most of the things. He
was a smart guy, do you remember
him Jinx?
Jinx’s laugh dies away.
JINX
Yeah I do
GARETH
So it was all handmade by the same
guy?
LEMON
Oh yes.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 4.
GARETH
That’s amazing, the guy was a real
Artist
LEMON
Yeah, a good guy he was
Gareth’s phone rings, he answers
GARETH
I’m sorry, I have to take this
Gareth takes a few steps away from them to take the call
GARETH
(on phone)
What? They’re pulling out? Oh for
Christ’s Sake!…
Gareth is furious. An awkward silence between Lemon and
Jinx, then Lemon smiles out of nowhere as if he’s just
remembered something funny and turns to Jinx
LEMON
That guy Hank was really a clever
guy, he made it all by himself,
that bookshelf took 7 months to
build, did you know that?
Jinx nods but looks annoyed
LEMON
…and when he finally-
Lemon is interrupted by Gareth screaming
GARETH
It’s just not on Terry, I’m not
having this kind of bullshit!
Lemon looks at Jinx, he finds the situation kind of amusing
GARETH
No, no, look, I’ve got clients,
we’ll sort out this bloody mess
when I’m back in the office.
Goodbye.
Gareth comes back and turns to Lemon and Jinx as if nothing
has happened.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 5.
GARETH
Sorry about that.. now, where were
we?
Silence. Lemon and Jinx exchange glances
GARETH
So, why don’t we talk numbers. Now
I’ll need to get a surveyor in
before I can give a firm quote, but
between you and me I think you
could be looking at 500 grand,
minus VAT.
JINX
…Ok
GARETH
Let’s sit
Gareth lays out some papers. Lemon looks at Jinx, for the
first time he looks apprehensive.
GARETH
So here’s the breakdown… that’s
how much you’ll pay in stamp
duty… Of course, the property
isn’t actually on the market yet,
but once the surveyor’s been round,
there’s no going back!
Gareth makes a theatrical face and laughs. Jinx laughs
uncomfortably.
JINX
Alright
Jinx still sounds a little hesitant but firm at the same
time, as if she’s accepting a mission she knows she might
not survive but has to accept anyway. Gareth looks at Jinx
and the document, then turns away and notices the bookshelf
GARETH
(absent-mindedly)
This bookshelf is really something
Lemon smiles
LEMON
Yes, Hank made that too. Great guy.
Jinx’s Mum loved reading books,
mostly about killing and cops,
stuff like that, after a while she
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 6.
LEMON (cont’d)
got so many that Frank just made
her this huge bookshelf
GARETH
I see… it’s a terrific piece of
work.
LEMON
You know a lot about these kind of
things?
GARETH
Well I deal with furniture every
day so yes, you could say so.
Gareth makes a kind of disturbing smile and turns back to
the bookshelf. Picks up a random book and chuckles
GARETH
These books have some spectacular
Titles
Gareth’s phone rings again, Gareth puts the book down and
rolls his eyes
GARETH
Sorry
Gareth goes off again to take the call and we hear him from
the next room
GARETH
(on phone)
Yeah?! What the fuck?! No, no just
tell him that… (shouting like
hell) fucking listen to me Terry!
Gareth turns back to call to Jinx and Lemon. They are both
looking pretty unimpressed. Gary acts like nothing is wrong
GARETH
Sorry folks, won’t be a minute
He turns back around. Lemon turns to Jinx
LEMON
Jinx, are you really going to go
through with this? Because you
know, if you go to Manchester – for
God knows why – me and Sharon will
only be able to come and see you
maybe once a mont-
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 7.
Jinx is looking at the bookshelf kind of hypnotized. She
stands up and goes to get the book that Gareth left on the
table and looks at it, it’s a ridiculous pulp criminal tale
with a crazy cover and title, she looks at it and hands it
to Lemon
JINX
She used to read the craziest stuff
LEMON
Yeah she loved her detectives and
gangsters, it’s all she talked
about
We can still hear Gareth shout from the other room but not
that much. Lemon hands the book back to Jinx and she puts it
back on the shelf
JINX
It is really beautiful
Lemon looks at Jinx with a curious look, but different from
the one he had at the beginning, he doesn’t seem worried
Gareth enters the room
GARETH
I’m sorry about this, we’ve got a
bit of an emergency back at the
office-
LEMON
I’ve Noticed
GARETH
I just need to go to my car and get
some documents, make a phone call
and I’ll be back with no
interruptions, I promise
Jinx doesn’t really seem to care and says without even
Turning
JINX
OK, no problem
GARETH
Thank you, I’m very sorry about
This
Gareth leaves the house, there’s just Jinx and Lemon left,
Lemon goes to sit, Jinx stays there, standing up, she’s not
looking at anything
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 8.
LEMON
That guy… I mean he’s not very
professional, that’s all I’m gonna
say. I mean, I would have just…
Jinx turns to Lemon
JINX
I remember the name of the guy
LEMON
What guy?
JINX
The guy, the guy at the party, his
name was Jordan
Lemon smiles
LEMON
Oh yeah, sure, Jordan, what a
guy… how could I not remember
that
Jinx smiles
LEMON
Jordan….
INT. LIVING ROOM. NIGHT
Flashback: Jordan, a small, fat man is lying drunk on the
floor under the bookshelf. With his eyes shut and a big
smile on his face he sings, head tilted back, chest puffed
out. In the background we hear a few drunken conversations
and a few men laughing hysterically at Jordan, calling his
name.